discussion on MSN(book review)

[Dimitrivsky] 說:
let's rock'n roll
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
This book provides students a very systematic procedure which they could follow along while writing without further confusing questions.
❤留 說:
well
❤留 說:
and it is a good book for students who learn composition writing
❤留 說:
when they have any questions about writing
❤留 說:
it seems thay can this book
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
Teachers of composition could profit by the merit also.
They could instruct them along with the book.
❤留 說:
yeah!
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I think that it is quite different from other writing book
❤留 說:
instructors even can learn something from this book
Lumi-Joyce 說:
because it is quite detailed
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
And since it illustrate its contents clearly, teachers may skip some simple parts that student read by themselves and explain more difficult chapters.
❤留 說:
and it fuses many aspects of writing
❤留 說:
like movie,painting
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I think the book can teach us how to present our composition
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
This book contains all sorts of genres of writing and different materials we may write about, from literature, visual arts and film.
❤留 說:
that we seldom write about
Lumi-Joyce 說:
we can follow the tips which had mention in the book
❤留 說:
and it illustrate very clearly
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
The professional writers’ articles (as examples harmonizing with each chapters’ themes) enlarge readers/students’ scope of horizon, which inspiring them to work harder in maybe imitating them in the first place.
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I think there is another key point the book teach us from the basic theory
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
steps by steps!
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yeah
Lumi-Joyce 說:
for example
❤留 說:
well
Lumi-Joyce 說:
it mention how to summary an article
❤留 說:
and it gave us many examples
Lumi-Joyce 說:
this is the first step to learn to write a good composition
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
After being familiar with professional articles, students may use them to begin their own original work since they are really masterpieces.
❤留 說:
because we can other people's skill from their example
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
It provides students essays, which encourage students to write as good as them and sympathize them since they make similar mistakes.
Lumi-Joyce 說:
from these student essays, we can know how to revise our problems
❤留 說:
yeah
❤留 說:
and when this book talk about paintings
❤留 說:
it would give us many paintings
❤留 說:
for students to practice
Lumi-Joyce 說:
just like our discussion in class before, we compare two articles
Lumi-Joyce 說:
and then we can notice which is better
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
It provides students essays, which encourage students to write as good as them and sympathize them since they make similar mistakes.
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
This book is endowed with vivid illustrations helping readers understand its words.
Its wording and typesetting are impeccable. With different colors and sizes of words.

❤留 說:
yeah
❤留 說:
because sometimes we do not know how to use words well

熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 加入對話。

[Dimitrivsky] 說:
here he is
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I think in the book, it provide many question to think after reading the article
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
haha
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
hi~everybody~
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
I am here~~~
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
thank you for waiting for me~~~~~
Lumi-Joyce 說:
it is important because we can realize some point which we egnore before
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
so what's now?
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
we have discussed a lot~~~
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
i'll give u our record and
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
u could tell us about your thoughts
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
thanks for yor kindness
❤留 說:
you have to write the article
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
we then discuss~~
❤留 說:
haha
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
oh haha
Lumi-Joyce 說:
welaom
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
Lumi-Joyce 說:
welcome
❤留 說:
ok le us continue
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
THNAKSSS!!!!!!!!
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
ok
Lumi-Joyce 說:
ok
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
go ahead
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I had talked about the question after the article
❤留 說:
so what the bad points do you think of this book?
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I find that the question the book provide after the article is the key point
Lumi-Joyce 說:
bad points...
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
恩亨~
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
questions make/force us to think, to reflect
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yes
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
to meditate XDDDD
❤留 說:
oh!i understand
❤留 說:
but when we have presentations
❤留 說:
we would ask calssmates questions
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
sharpen our interpretive skills
Lumi-Joyce 說:
just like the Q-A after the presentation
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
they construct our own analysis~~
❤留 說:
and when i present the part about
❤留 說:
visual arts
❤留 說:
i think it is interesting to know classmates' ideas about the artworks
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
i agree
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
it is true
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yeswhen we share our idea with everyone
❤留 說:
ko can you descript more clearly
Lumi-Joyce 說:
we can realize which we egnore before
Lumi-Joyce 說:
there is another good point
❤留 說:
for example?
Lumi-Joyce 說:
in the book , it has a "renenber" column it can remind us some writing tips
Lumi-Joyce 說:
Ohexample
❤留 說:
i got it
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
sharing is quite important in the writing pedagogy
❤留 說:
some useful tips which we can use in the composition
❤留 說:
FUCK where is ko
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
students' own thoughts and teachers' are interacting if sharing
Lumi-Joyce 說:
maybe you can turn to page 482
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
i am here~~
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
i am thinking~~
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
ㄎㄎ
Lumi-Joyce 說:
when I see the picture
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
yes~discussion is a very good way to improve ourselves
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I will focus on the woman because she is the only female
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
therefore, the remembering section, as joyce metioned
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
is very useful
❤留 說:
then other students can say their own opinions
Lumi-Joyce 說:
maybe Ocean or Dimitir focuson the man in white....
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yes
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
yes we are!!!
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
?
Lumi-Joyce 說:
it depends on the view point of eveyone
Lumi-Joyce 說:
we can know more by everyone's sharing
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
student's discussions render the learning dynamic
❤留 說:
it also can let us know some really famous paintings in the world
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
and this book provides great example followed great questions
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
and tips for us to re-enforce our memory
Lumi-Joyce 說:
to recieve othere people's opinion is helpfulp for writing, because we can make the content of our article deeply and widely
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
yes
❤留 說:
you mean re-enforce our compositions by re-enforce our memory?
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
and we can know something special at the same time
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
for instance, the paintings~
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yes
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
some famous essays
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
enable us to remember the main points that we may utilize in our composition
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
let's get back to the book
Lumi-Joyce 說:
ok
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
how's the book
❤留 說:
oh i know !
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
??
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
i think it's just like an "Anthology of Techniques and Masterpieces for composition"
Lumi-Joyce 說:
why
❤留 說:
wow
❤留 說:
it is a little hard to understand
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
it says a lot provide wide range of example and each ex. has great quesitons and steps to arrive at making a great one like those
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yes
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
and i make this bizzare comparaison coz' it's classix
Lumi-Joyce 說:
It also teach us how to use the correct form
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
ok that's what i was truing to say
Lumi-Joyce 說:
haha
❤留 說:
i !!
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
but its words are much more easy to comprehend
Lumi-Joyce 說:
I was impress about the chapter which teach us to write in formal
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
understand!!
❤留 說:
because many students in Taiwan do not know the right form
Lumi-Joyce 說:
you can turn to page 507
Lumi-Joyce 說:
it provide an good model
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
wow great sample and template
Lumi-Joyce 說:
we can follow it
Lumi-Joyce 說:
that' s why I think the book is an complete writing text bood
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
wow this book is off the hock
Lumi-Joyce 說:
k
❤留 說:
so ?
❤留 說:
we can finish the discussion
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
it also provide APA and MLA formal
Lumi-Joyce 說:
yes
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
yep
Lumi-Joyce 說:
it is useful for us to write any paper in the future
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
那我們要怎麼寫BOKREVIEW呢
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
we have four persons
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
yes
❤留 說:
就給柯志儒謝壓
❤留 說:
剛剛說這樣的
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:

Lumi-Joyce 說:
haha
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
haahha
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
haha
❤留 說:
剛剛說的壓
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
這樣你叫可以加入你的看法
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
分工合作!!
❤留 說:
dimi對吧
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
融入你的看法進去文章
❤留 說:
因為你前面的討論都沒加入
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
真的嗎= =
❤留 說:
面也等於沒有
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
500自好難拆唷
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
可以分工寫還不賴攸
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
太難分攻了
❤留 說:
反正只是融合我們的畫
Lumi-Joyce 說:
haha
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
一人125
❤留 說:
不賴你的
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
老師大可以要我們每人血液篇
❤留 說:
別囉嗦
❤留 說:
你自己要這樣的
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
??
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
我打的大概有兩百五十字吧
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
真的喔!!!
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
我可以整合
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
我有故意打完整據 比較長的 論點前面也沒有重複
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
那你們一人寫125個自來
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
我來整合
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
OK吧
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
所以我的points 大概就那樣~~只是需要個人把大家的論點整理起來
Lumi-Joyce 說:
喔喔我剛剛都沒想到
Lumi-Joyce 說:
早知道我也學Dimitri
Lumi-Joyce 說:
哈哈
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
哈哈
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
什麼??
Lumi-Joyce 說:
我有的時候會斷句耶
❤留 說:
恩亨
Lumi-Joyce 說:
哀
Lumi-Joyce 說:

[Dimitrivsky] 說:
嗯嗯 ~~ 所以OCEAN你看我傳給你的前面部分 架上後面討論的 湊一湊就好了~~
❤留 說:
可是還是接的起來吧
❤留 說:
恩
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
真的嗎
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
那寫太爛別怪我喔
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
我的POINTS有照邏輯下來 我是說前面我每句都很長納編~~
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
恩恩??
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
不會啦= = 你程度超好的
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
OK~~
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:

熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
ㄎㄎ
Lumi-Joyce 說:
老師有說Ocean很不錯喔
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
我先看看你傳的簍
Lumi-Joyce 說:
Dimitri可以證明
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
對呀 MEETING時老師就有特別強調
Lumi-Joyce 說:
老師是再meeting十獎的
Lumi-Joyce 說:
對啊
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
哈哈現在都降說
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
MEI-YA親口說的
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
真的嗎!!!!
Lumi-Joyce 說:
對啊
Lumi-Joyce 說:
我也有聽到
❤留 說:

[Dimitrivsky] 說:
你英國文學也很厲害
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
太感動了
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
哈哈
Lumi-Joyce 說:
真的
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
great
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
有嗎
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
沒有啦
❤留 說:
大家
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
你們才利害呢

[Dimitrivsky] 說:
大家把不必要的東西刪掉後 就PO上BOLGGER
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
吧
熱舞1 7 頭號甜心 12月30六點鍾 遊藝館小禮堂裡 熱舞甜心 甜入你的心Ocean柯米3833 說:
好
[Dimitrivsky] 說:
晚安